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« Thread Started on Mar 31, 2009, 9:51pm » | |
Comment on this poem here, or if you haven't yet read it you can do so by going to: The past soul underground club at 130 bpm
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« Reply #1 on Apr 21, 2009, 9:36am » | |
Yes indeed. A mesmerising insight into the zombie sub culture of robotic youth. A necessary part of growth?. I think not . I like the thumping portrayal, but started feeling dizzy. Off to the pub now to read the times.
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« Reply #2 on May 7, 2009, 6:50am » | |
This is very vividly portrayed. I love the image of the skeletons, it creates the atmosphere for the rest of the poem.
I felt very drawn into the scene.
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